In the wonderful scheme of things you'll receive a B- with regard to effort. Where exactly you lost us was first on all the facts. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more correct in this article. Having said that, let me reveal to you just what did do the job. Your article (parts of it) can be really powerful which is most likely why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can certainly notice the leaps in reasoning you make, I am not necessarily convinced of how you appear to connect your points which make your final result. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but hope in the near future you actually link your dots better.