Throughout this wonderful scheme of things you secure a B- just for effort and hard work. Exactly where you lost me was first in all the facts. You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And that could not be more correct right here. Having said that, allow me say to you exactly what did do the job. Your article (parts of it) is certainly rather powerful and this is probably why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can easily notice a leaps in logic you make, I am not convinced of just how you appear to connect your ideas that make the actual conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point but wish in the foreseeable future you connect the dots much better.