In the amazing scheme of things you receive a B+ for effort. Exactly where you confused everybody was first in your specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more true here. Having said that, let me tell you what exactly did work. The text is certainly incredibly engaging and this is probably the reason why I am making the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can certainly see the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not necessarily convinced of how you seem to unite the details that help to make the final result. For the moment I will yield to your position but hope in the foreseeable future you actually connect the facts much better.