Throughout the awesome scheme of things you'll get a B+ just for effort. Exactly where you actually lost me ended up being on the specifics. As they say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more accurate here. Having said that, permit me tell you what exactly did do the job. Your article (parts of it) is actually pretty convincing which is possibly why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can certainly see a jumps in logic you make, I am not sure of exactly how you appear to connect your details which produce the conclusion. For right now I shall yield to your issue however wish in the near future you actually link the dots much better.