Throughout this excellent scheme of things you'll receive a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost me personally was in all the details. As they say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me inform you just what exactly did work. The writing is very powerful and this is possibly the reason why I am making an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, while I can easily see the leaps in reason you make, I am not convinced of how you appear to unite the details which help to make the final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your position but wish in the near future you connect the facts better.