In the wonderful scheme of things you'll secure an A+ just for effort. Where you lost us was on all the particulars. You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And that could not be more correct here. Having said that, let me inform you just what did give good results. Your article (parts of it) is definitely extremely persuasive which is possibly why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, whilst I can certainly notice the jumps in reason you make, I am definitely not convinced of how you appear to unite your points which help to make the final result. For right now I shall subscribe to your point however wish in the near future you link your facts better.