In this awesome design of things you'll receive a B- just for hard work. Where you actually misplaced us was on all the facts. As they say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more correct at this point. Having said that, allow me say to you exactly what did do the job. The article (parts of it) is quite powerful which is possibly the reason why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, although I can certainly notice the jumps in logic you come up with, I am not necessarily confident of just how you appear to connect your ideas that help to make the actual conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but hope in the foreseeable future you actually connect the facts much better.