Throughout the great pattern of things you actually get an A just for effort and hard work. Exactly where you lost us ended up being in all the specifics. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more correct here. Having said that, permit me tell you what did do the job. The article (parts of it) can be incredibly engaging and this is possibly why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can certainly notice the leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am not necessarily sure of exactly how you seem to connect your details that produce the conclusion. For the moment I will subscribe to your issue however wish in the future you actually connect the dots better.