In this grand scheme of things you secure a B- with regard to effort and hard work. Where you actually misplaced me was first on your particulars. As as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what did give good results. The writing is definitely highly convincing and that is most likely the reason why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can see a jumps in logic you make, I am definitely not convinced of just how you seem to connect the ideas which in turn help to make your final result. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your issue however hope in the future you actually link the dots better.