In the grand scheme of things you actually get a B+ for effort. Where you actually confused me personally was first in your details. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more correct here. Having said that, let me say to you what exactly did work. Your article (parts of it) is actually very engaging and this is probably why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can easily see a jumps in logic you come up with, I am not convinced of just how you appear to unite the ideas which in turn help to make your final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but wish in the future you actually link your dots better.